After one listen to every 'track' in the list I can say I like the guitarwork, albeit a bit sloppy at some points. I like the little hammer-on/pull-off parts.
Can't really say much about the lyrics, I always have trouble actually hearing what's being said/sung the first listen, seems like I'm more focused on the instruments.
Vocally, it's not that strong, nor terrible. It seems to me that you're a bit off at some points, especially on the end of sentences/lines. It sounds like you drop a bit at those points. There are also moments in which it looks like you have too many words/syllables to actually fit in with the music =P
I'm not experienced with writing music or anything, I have made attempts but never got further than a bunch of chords and a chorus here and there, so I'm just saying what came up at first listen. It's better than anything I've ever managed to write down I'd say! Keep it up =)
Out of interest, what did you use to record (and edit for that matter)?